1. 11. 16 Hi Daniel, I have read the latest post on your blog and you have a lot of cool stuff in it. Also lots of detail and pictures in it. I like it because you have put a lot of words and pictures, they are different and that is good. You have told about your magic box and your box is made out of titanium and fossil shark teeth all around the corners. Next time make the words bigger, so it is easier to read.
Hi Daniel, I love the cool words you have used in your poem! It is very YOU! I looked at the pictures first and that got me excited to read your poem. Super proud of your learning this year XXX
Kia ora Daniel! I'm Katelynn from Grey Main School Mamaku hub! I really like how you have some colour but I think that you could make the size 24 or bigger so we can read it! Did you like making your poem in class? He whetu koe! (Your a star in te reo maori!)
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ReplyDeleteHi Daniel,
I have read the latest post on your blog and you have a lot of cool stuff in it. Also lots of detail and pictures in it. I like it because you have put a lot of words and pictures, they are different and that is good. You have told about your magic box and your box is made out of titanium and fossil shark teeth all around the corners. Next time make the words bigger, so it is easier to read.
Hi Daniel, I love the cool words you have used in your poem! It is very YOU! I looked at the pictures first and that got me excited to read your poem. Super proud of your learning this year XXX
ReplyDeletethanks MATE
DeleteKia ora Daniel! I'm Katelynn from Grey Main School Mamaku hub! I really like how you have some colour but I think that you could make the size 24 or bigger so we can read it! Did you like making your poem in class? He whetu koe! (Your a star in te reo maori!)
ReplyDeleteThanks for that. I enjoyed making this. I have made it bold so it will hopefully be better next time.
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