Persuasive writing-Why is it a good idea to have pets

We have been doing persuasive writing about why we should have pets. Here is my persuasive writing about pets.

Title A Short Statement about the topic. eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’	Pets
Overview/ Statement of position A brief statement of your view about the topic.  What you believe or want to argue.	I strongly believe we should have pets.
Series of Arguments Reasons Your points supporting your view about the topic.  Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments. Remember -argument -supporting detail, reasons, examples	Firstly ,  it is a great idea to have pets!!!.  They give many people comfort  like they can give you cuddles and you can pat them.  They are funny like my dog eats teabags.
	Secondly, they are very fun to play with when you are bored. For example , you can  play ball  or  run  together.   Other things you can do with your pets are playing jumping barrels or going to the dog park.
	Thirdly,  some dogs are specially trained for people with disabilities . Also they can sniff out when  you are going to have an epileptic fit. If you are blind they can help you know where to go.
	Finally, pets are good to have because they can give you food like pet chickens give you eggs and goats and cows give you milk.
Concluding statement Summing it up.  A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.	I strongly think having pets is a good idea because they give many people comfort,  they are very fun to play with when you are bored,  some dogs are specially trained for people with disabilities and pets are good to have because they can give you food. I strongly believe we should have pets!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!