Learning Intentions
I am learning to use language features to make my writing interesting and engaging for the reader.
I am learning to think carefully about the words I use so that my writing is descriptive and engaging for the reader.
I am learning to add an appropriate visual to my work
I will be successful when I can show….
-I have used some language features to make my writing interesting and engaging (smile, metaphor, alliteration, onomatopoeia, rhyme)
-I have carefully chosen some interesting words to include in my writing
-I have some descriptive words in my writing (adjectives)
-I have added a photo to my writing
I love my synovial fluid because if I lost it my joints would go like a rusty hinge.
If I didn’t have synovial fluid then you wouldn't be reading this poem.
My synovial fluid lets me pick up things. It lets me build robots.
I love my synovial fluid because it is like parts in a machine.
It lets me hug people to show love.
I love my synovial fluid because it lets me do the things I love to do like going tramping.
I LOVE MY SYNOVIAL FLUID BECAUSE
IT IS THE BEST PART OF ME.
If I didn’t have synovial fluid then you wouldn't be reading this poem.
My synovial fluid lets me pick up things. It lets me build robots.
I love my synovial fluid because it is like parts in a machine.
It lets me hug people to show love.
I love my synovial fluid because it lets me do the things I love to do like going tramping.
I LOVE MY SYNOVIAL FLUID BECAUSE
IT IS THE BEST PART OF ME.
Kia ora Daniel. You have certainly described an interesting 'part' of your body! Synovial fluid is not something we think about often. You have certainly given it a very good 'write up'. I will pay more attention in future. I like the way you have used simile to help the reader build a picture in their mind. Maybe you could try metaphor next time!
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