Planet Writing

Create and Describe Your Own Planet - Description writing task

Term 2 Weeks 5-6

Purpose of this piece of writing is to:

Learning Intentions

I am learning to use language features to make my writing interesting and engaging
for the reader.

I am learning to use topic-specific vocabulary.

I am learning to include Te Reo Māori words in my writing.

I will be successful when I can show….

-I have used some language features to make my writing interesting and
engaging (simile, metaphor, alliteration, onomatopoeia, rhyme)

-I have carefully chosen some topic specific words to include in my writing.

-I have used some Te Reo Māori

Focus

We are continuing to look at descriptive writing. This week you are writing a
descriptive piece of writing to promote your imaginary planet. You aim is to convince people
to move to your planet.
You want your writing to allow the reader to be able to imagine what it is like on your planet.

First, we will look at an excerpt of a video describing the moon from the
Avatar movie. Click here to get to video= Pandora.

Second, we will discuss together what you will need in your work
to make it successful and look at how to plan our work. Then you will plan your work and check
with a teacher before you start writing.

Third, do your piece of writing.

Fourth, complete you piece of writing. Remember to proofread (check spelling
and punctuation) and edit (does it make sense? do you need to change any sentences?) yourself
and with a buddy
and fill in your self and peer-assessment. Check it with a teacher.

The Veneno

On this planet you get there by flying through the portal aka  a black hole on
a Boeing 747 - 800 i . This planet is in the galaxy called Veneno. This is located in the
asteroid belt.
This planet formed when some of the Venenos magnetic field mixed with the nitrogen
gas to form nitro magneto. Nitro Magneto is a  fuel used to power to magical supercars
that live there. In the center of the veneno there is the huayra which is the source of
heat and light it is kind of like our ra (sun).

In  Veneno there are four planets Pagani , P1 , Huayra  and Koenigsegg.
Pagani has 2 moons and is the coldest . P1 has 7  moons and has rings made of rock
and ice and is the hottest. Huayra has no moons but it is the source of heat and light.
Koenigsegg has 1 big moon.  

The magical supercars have any type of tool you could ever need.
If you ever need one  of the magical supercars to come to you you just have to shout
boongly bingle bongle and they will come. If you need a tool you just think of it and the
magical supercars will give it to you and you can keep it forever and it will never break.  
 They are very friendly and intelligent. It only takes a minute to get here
so instead of going down to Mitre 10 MEGA and paying $100 on tools you need to build
you could come here and get them for FREE.

By Daniel

AKA the creator and lead owner of Planet Super Cars.   

747

Black hole aka the portal