Tuesday, 14 March 2017

My Sea Week Writing

For Sea Week we wrote about why the ocean is important. Here is my writing work. Please leave a kind, positive and thoughtful comment.


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  1. Anonymous16 March 2017 at 14:48

    Kia ora Daniel, it is Lincon here, I really like your work it has some really good information on the sea. I like how you said what you like to do at the beach. Was this work hard for you?(Goodbye For Now)

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    1. Anonymous16 March 2017 at 20:03

      hi no it was not hard for me

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  3. Anonymous28 March 2017 at 21:25

    Hi Daniel, Sorry my comment didnt stay up, I may not have published it correctly. Dad and I are very proud of the effort you are putting into your writing this term. Even when it gets hard you dont give up! Good on you for listening to some feedback and taking it as positive learning XXX

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